Talk:Trijata/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AmritasyaPutra (talk · contribs) 14:04, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

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Discussion
I have started the review. It does not have any cleanup banners and does not contain any seemingly copyright infringements, I will continue with the six good article criteria. Thank you. --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 14:05, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

Initial feedback on the lead:
 * Can you correct the Sanskrit spelling to त्रिजटा.
 * Corrected. Redtigerxyz  Talk 11:39, 10 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Could you clarify "In the original Ramayana" in the lead? (Probably adding "by Valmiki" as done in the body?)
 * Removed word "original". Ramayana is introduced in the lead. Redtigerxyz  Talk 11:39, 10 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Could you clarify "Southeast Asian versions" (Probably substituting with "in the Thai Ramakien" as done in the body?)
 * Southeast Asian versions include Thai, Malay, Indonesian versions. Sentence is referenced in "Trijata and Sita" para 1. Redtigerxyz  Talk 11:39, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
 * The lead has "Southeast Asian versions often depict her as the wife of Rama's monkey general Hanuman...", it the body it is present in "In the Thai Ramakien, Hanuman helps...". Am I mistaken? --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 12:42, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
 * <span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra, The last para of "After the war" talks about Thai, Malay and Javanese traditions. Redtigerxyz Talk 12:52, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Ok, right! All my queries are answered, I will continue with the review. --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 12:56, 12 October 2014 (UTC)

The article looks well-written, neutral. I found a few reference which did not actually support the text but maybe I am not reading the translation correctly. I will continue the review after your response to the above feedback. Thank you. --<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra T 13:26, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
 * <span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra, Thanks for starting the review. I may be a busy in real life over the next few days and may take taime to reply. Redtigerxyz Talk 11:39, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the pass, <span style="font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933">AmritasyaPutra . Redtigerxyz  Talk 05:33, 18 October 2014 (UTC)