Talk:Trimorphic Protennoia

Under the section Mysticism the phrase "as Gnosticism was more concerned about the way the text affected people than the content of it." seems a rather egotistic statement. None of the Gnostic writers are around to ask and this statement is nothing more than a guess. Might I suggest "it seems as though some Gnostic writings are more concerned about the way the text affects people than the content of it." Wjbean 22:56, 10 April 2006 (UTC)