Talk:Tristimania/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:38, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Will post my comments soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

No copyvio concerns; no dablinks, duplinks or broken external links.
 * Noted.

Coming to the prose,


 * Inline citations missing for the last line of 'Context' and the last lines in the 1st and the 5th paras of 'Book'
 * Added.


 * Genetic vulnerability What exactly does it mean? And vulnerability to what?
 * Glossed.


 * 'She' is a bit repetitive in some places in 'Book', a few of these instances could be replaced with 'Griffiths'.
 * Done.


 * describing the Old English wōd A link for Old English? Should 'wōd' be in italics?
 * Done both.


 * Mercutio (here played by Orson Welles) Maybe add which play it is referring to, directed by whom, the year?
 * Done.


 * A link for 'antipsychotics'?
 * Done.


 * seeing people's wings Maybe 'wings' should be in quotes since this was her imagination and not for real?
 * Added.


 * As she is wished "Buen Camino" Maybe add a translation here?
 * Added.


 * 'Shakespeare' should be linked at the first mention
 * Done.


 * Tristimania is not in italics consistently throughout the article
 * Fixed.


 * Does the article consistently use British English?
 * I think so, at least it all feels natural to this native. Added tag.


 * Access date missing for refs, 25, 26, 28
 * Added.


 * Ref. 26 has the 'G' in 'Griffiths' in lower case
 * Fixed.

That is all. A nice read :) Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 14:03, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much!
 * Good job. Happy to promote :) Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 16:59, 17 April 2020 (UTC)