Talk:Tropical Depression Five-E (2008)/GA1

GA Review
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Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. I made a few copy edits which you are free to revert if I changed the meaning. Everything looks good. There are just a few issues.
 * Comments:
 * There are some dead links.
 * http://www.nhc.noaa.gov/archive/2008/ep05/ep052008.public.a.003.shtml?
 * http://www.nhc.noaa.gov/archive/2008/ep05/ep052008.public.a.004.shtml?
 * http://www.nhc.noaa.gov/archive/2008/ep05/ep052008.public.a.006.shtml?
 * What is "Hill of Ortega, Cabbage" as I have never heard of it?

Everything else looks good. Nicely written!

&mdash; Mattisse (Talk) 22:29, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

The "Hill of Ortega, Cabbage" was lost in translation. I also fixed those dead links. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 22:56, 24 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Also, http://www.nhc.noaa.gov/archive/2008/ep05/ep052008.public.a.006.shtml? which is still there. Glad you resolved the Cabbage thing!

&mdash; Mattisse (Talk) 23:20, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks hink, I got the last reference then :) Cyclonebiskit (talk) 23:59, 24 June 2009 (UTC)


 * OK. &mdash; Mattisse (Talk) 00:20, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

Congratulations. Good work!
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): Well written b (MoS): Follows relevant MoS
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): Well referenced b (citations to reliable sources): Sources are reliable  c (OR): No OR
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): Covers major aspects  b (focused): Remains focused on topic
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias: Netrual
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.: Stable
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: Pass
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: Pass
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: Pass

&mdash; Mattisse (Talk) 00:20, 25 June 2009 (UTC)