Talk:Tropical Depression Gener (2008)/GA1

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Hi, I will be reviewing this article which is currently up for GAN. I should have the full review out shortly. Cyclonebiskit 22:19, 22 January 2009 (UTC)


 * 1) Later that day Gener made landfall to the east of Hong Kong and then dissipated early the next day. remove "then"
 * 2) However because of Gener being in an area of moderate to high shear, the convection was disorganized near the center. The Wind shear had not prevented Gener's center from deepening and thus the JTWC issued a Tropical Cyclone Formation Alert. Can you clarify this a bit, it's somewhat confusing.
 * 3) '' In Hong Kong & China, as the Hong Kong Observatory and the China Meteorological Agency disagreed with the Japan Meteorological Agency in thinking that Gener was a Tropical Depression and thus no tropical cyclone signals or warnings were issued by either agency." remove the "&" and reword the sentence, it's a bit messy

Just a few minor issues that should be easy to fix. As such, I'm putting the article on hold until these issues are addressed. Cyclonebiskit 22:37, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Ok, everything looks good now, nice job! Cyclonebiskit 21:08, 25 January 2009 (UTC)