Talk:Tropical Depression One (1988)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:55, 12 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article within 60 minutes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:55, 12 March 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "the depression became very disorganized as emerged" as it emerged
 * "The floods left widespread areas without without electricity" take out either the first or second without.
 * "the Red Cross sent aid to the victims of Tropical Depression Ten in Cuba." you mean Tropical Depression One I presume

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it once those issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:07, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Yea, brain fart here and there. Thanks for the review! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 06:21, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good, article now passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 17:35, 12 March 2011 (UTC)