Talk:Tropical Storm Abby (1964)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 03:36, 13 June 2014 (UTC)

Few minor things.
 * With UTC, have you considered using colons? It's noticeable right next to the CDT.
 * "showed an abrupt in organization" - abrupt... change?
 * It'd be great to see another mention of the date toward the end of the first MH paragraph
 * "being far less than 100 mi (155 km) in diameter." - unless you're converting from something else, 100 mi should round to 160 km
 * Seeing as you only mention the town of Edna once, I wondered why you specified that the storm moved over that small, random town?
 * It was mentioned in the reports so I figured why not include it. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:42, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Could you link "Gale warnings"? Ditto "Colorado River (Texas)"
 * "Abby's small size results in its effects being limited" - how come the present tense?
 * "and tossed the structure 75 yd (69 m)" - given that you already use ft elsewhere in the article, could you convert this to ft, with m in parenthesis?
 * Not sure if you realized, but Storm data goes back to 1959 and has info on the storm, but not sure if it's redundant or not.
 * Nothing extra of interest there, everything is already in the preliminary report :) Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:42, 13 June 2014 (UTC)

That's it. Pretty good article :) ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:36, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I believe I got to everything. Thanks for the review, Hink!! Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:42, 13 June 2014 (UTC)