Talk:Tropical Storm Carlotta (2018)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 17:11, 11 April 2019 (UTC)

Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane 17:11, 11 April 2019

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 * "Tropical Storm Carlotta was a tropical cyclone that caused flooding in southwestern Mexico" could you be more specific? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Changed to say "several states within southwestern and central Mexico." I also mention the states in the impact portion of the lead. Noah Talk 17:59, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "After having increased in organization, the system was designated as a tropical depression on June 14. Late on the next day, the system strengthened into a tropical storm, after which it was named Carlotta" you could probably cut this down slightly to "Following an increase in organization, the system was designated as a tropical depression on June 14, and became a tropical storm the following evening." YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Changed. Noah Talk 17:59, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "On June 16, Carlotta slowed down and unexpectedly stalled " isn't this fairly close to redundant? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Removed the part about slowing down. Noah Talk 17:59, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "DamageUnknown" why list it if it's unknown? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Removed. Noah Talk 17:59, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * " Around that time, the NHC forecasted that a mid-level ridge over" "forecasted" is not a word. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Changed. Noah Talk 17:59, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Any fluctuation in intensity on 6/16? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * The MH does mention it began to intensify around 0600 on the 16th. Noah Talk 17:59, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * " with a contracting eye and more symmetric eyewall.[11]"link to eye (cyclone). YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Linked Noah Talk 17:59, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "In the NHC's last discussion "you don't explain what that is. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * reworded the sentence. Noah Talk 18:12, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "and the DN-III-E Plan was activated to help with recovery efforts.[23]"what is that? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * linked and gave a brief description of what the plan is. Noah Talk 18:26, 27 April 2019 (UTC)


 * The order in which impact is presented is strange. Why not go south to north instead of north to south? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 * changed the order. Noah Talk 18:28, 27 April 2019 (UTC)