Talk:Tropical Storm Dalila (2007)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

I will review more fully tomorrow, but for starters, here has more information. YE Pacific  Hurricane 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * "On the mainland of Mexico, the outerbands" wikilink to rainband. YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Please use TWO's in the MH.
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:38, 4 July 2013 (UTC)


 * What was Dallia's forecast peak? YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


 * When the the NHC re-assess the intensity of the storm to say 45 knots? the MH is a bit short for a very recent storm that was not /that/ short-lived. YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * What are you asking me to do here?--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


 * How close did it comer to Socorro Island. YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Oops, I said it in the lede but not the MH.--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


 * "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, causing weakening and disorganization of the cloud pattern.[5] " to "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, resulting in weakening as the cloud pattern became less organized.[5] " YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Why was Dallia declared a remnant low? YE  Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Change the "Impact" header to "Impact and aftermath". YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


 * "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports of deaths or damage.[1] " to "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports any deaths or damage.[1] "
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


 * "As the storm weakened, it produced rough seas and heavy rains over parts of Baja California Sur.[7] " mention this towards the end of the impact YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Any red/green/blue alerts for MX (the above link in the start of the review should have that)? YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * There were some blue alerts, according to one of the newspaper articles.--12george1 (talk) 03:38, 4 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Where in particular (what cites were there impact). YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope, I couldn't find that out--12george1 (talk) 03:39, 4 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Any damage total? YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Link to newspapers in refs if applicable. 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Ill find you more impact links later. YE Pacific  Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)