Talk:Tropical Storm Debra (1978)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan 21:43, 25 September 2011 (UTC)

I have six issues, all should be minor, and thus I'm leaving Debra on hold. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * "It was first known as Tropical Depression Four after its formation on August 25 until August 26, when it was upgraded to Tropical Storm Debra after data collected by aircraft indicated it had strengthened" sounds odd, I suggest changing it to "Fomring on Augst 25, it was upgraded to Tropical Storm Debra based on data from a Hurricane Hunter aircraft.YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * Done.
 * Remove all convert templates since it is WPTC policy not to use them for NHC AOR storms. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:43, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Agree for windspeeds, disagree for all others. Also, could you link to the policy?
 * Here. However, I happen to agree with you that convert templates are needed for NHC AOR storms. Feel free to open a dissucusion on the project talk page.YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:24, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Wikilink to GMT in the MH.YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * Done.
 * "A flash flood watch was issued in advance of Debra for the whole of Louisiana."link Louisiana. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * Louisiana is already linked in the lede, so I don't think it needs to be wikilinked.
 * "Louisiana had moderate flooding, especially in Rapides Parish;[19] 6 inches (15 cm) of rain fell at Lake Charles and Lafayette, 3 inches (7.6 cm) of rain fell at Shreveport, and 3.5 inches (8.9 cm) at Monroe.[20]" tihs sentence is long, I'd suggest spliting it up. 21:43, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Done.
 * Any damage total? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:43, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I found data for every 1970s storm that impacted the U.S. except Debra.
 * Wikilink to season article in see also section. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:43, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Did that before and got reverted.
 * Odd. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:24, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Enough issues have been adressed for me to pass the article. Congrats HF25.YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:24, 25 September 2011 (UTC)