Talk:Tropical Storm Delia (1973)/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)

Great article overall. Putting this on-hold to allow for my sole concern to be addressed. Shouldn't take more than a few minutes to fix up. – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 01:03, 29 September 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * I did a bit of copyediting but the prose looks good generally.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * I'm a bit concerned that there's so much info about naming trivia in the second paragraph of the lead. Could this be removed?
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Much better. Thanks! – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 01:15, 29 September 2009 (UTC)