Talk:Tropical Storm Dora (2005)/GA1

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GA Review
These are some of the reasons that I failed this article: I would continue, but I think these are sufficient grounds.  Plasticup  T / C  20:57, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
 * There are Spelling errors in the lead.
 * There are WP:ACCESS violations at every opportunity, and are especially egregious in the lead.
 * The article is short to the point that it may not be comprehensive.
 * The explanation of Dvorak T-numbers is clumsy and probably unnecessary.
 * Other instances of jargon (i.e. deep convection) are unlinked and unexplained.
 * The citations are bare.
 * The Reference heading is a casual "Refs", and External links has been abbreviated to "Links".
 * There is no "See also" section, which may or may be justified.

Mabey I can fix this up a little. Add see Also, an External links, and a references section.Leave Message orYellow Evan home
 * You have fixed one of the many problems. That is good, but this article is still a long way from Good Article status.  Plasticup  T / C  03:40, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

"The last advisory was issued by JTWC that afternoon." - Am I missing something here? - CWY2190    ( talk  •  contributions )  04:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

I ma justing saying it a little differently. More in a moment.Leave Message orYellow Evan home 04:07, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

I have fixed two. I will be fixing one more.Leave Message orYellow Evan home 04:11, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

I tried to fix the refs but it does not work. Leave Message ,Yellow Evan home ,Sandbox[ 04:14, 6 November 2008 (UTC)