Talk:Tropical Storm Earl (2004)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheAustinMan (talk · contribs) 22:06, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

Hello Tropical Analyst! I will be reviewing TS Earl.

Lead

 * "mid-August" could use an en dash.
 * I'm pretty sure it is supposed to be a standard hyphen.
 * "thirty-four roofs" → 34 roofs
 * . TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 22:20, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

Meteorological history
Overall, the MH has a lot of jargon that can and should be linked, but I'll also list a few specific cases below. As a rule of thumb 3% of words in an article should be linked.
 * "...much-improved banding features and fair upper-level outflow..." Please link some meteorological terms to an appropriate article.
 * "...embedded and under the influence of a deep easterly flow around the southern periphery of a subtropical ridge of high pressure to the cyclone's north..." You should link a few of these jargon words.
 * " At this time, the cyclone was situated about 325 mi (525 km/h) east of Barbados." Same deal here, link Barbados.
 * "Within an environment characterized by low wind shear, high atmospheric humidity, and warm sea surface temperatures, Earl intensified, reaching a peak intensity of 50 mph (85 km/h) by 0600 UTC on August 15. Initial forecasts from the National Hurricane Center..." Link the meteorological terms, and the NHC.
 * . TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 22:20, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
 * What's a hunter hunter aircraft?
 * Fixed. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 22:20, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

Preparations and impact

 * Link minor island countries and warnings/watches throughout this section. Also link organizations.
 * "On the main island, the roofs were blown off..." No need to have 'the'
 * You repeat the fact that several hundreds of people evacuated into schools in the second paragraph. Remove the one in the second paragraph, because its already in the first - "Several hundred people evacuated to shelters set up at local schools."
 * Done. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 22:20, 13 January 2013 (UTC)