Talk:Tropical Storm Etau (2009)/GA1

GA Review
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Note: This Article needs a slight update before its GAN is passed Jason Rees (talk) 23:26, 4 October 2009 (UTC)


 * GA review (see What is a good article?)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * Pass/Fail:

✅Jason Rees (talk) 00:31, 18 November 2009 (UTC) ✅Jason Rees (talk) 00:31, 18 November 2009 (UTC) --maclean (talk) 00:22, 8 November 2009 (UTC)
 * 3 Public domain images (hosted at Commons) ok.
 * Meteorological history: winds peaked at 95 km/h (60 mph 10-minute sustained) and a barometric pressure of 990 hPa (mbar).[12] - the infobox says the winds peaked at 75 km/h + pressure bottomed at 992 hPa
 * Preparations: evacuated roughly 47,000 residents from western regions along the coast - do you know where specifically the evacuations took place? Is this a separate evacuation than the In Hyogo state, another 2,000 people were evacuated...
 * As far as i am aware they were seperate but i cant check with the primary author to check as he is rather [|pissed off at me for some reason]Jason Rees (talk) 00:31, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Since this assertion that it was a further 2,000 people cannot be verified by the provided references, it fails Verifiability --maclean (talk) 19:39, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Ive removed it for now If cyclonebiskit canverify they were seperate he can add them back in.Jason Rees (talk) 23:16, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Removed what? Nothing has been removed. --maclean (talk) 02:14, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Actually it has been removed Unless im missing something?.Jason Rees (talk) 02:41, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
 * ok. maclean (talk) 02:48, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Make spelling of Hyōgo Prefecture consistent.
 * Do you know if there has been any update on the 2 missing people?
 * Im trying to keep an eye on damages of the PTS and their hasnt been any update on the 2 missing that ive seen.Jason Rees (talk) 17:43, 12 November 2009 (UTC)