Talk:Tropical Storm Ewiniar (2018)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC)

Will do the last one tonight. Noah Talk 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC)


 * then over northern Hainan replace the bolded with "and later"
 * and reach peak intensity. You should mention what the peak was.
 * ships were forced to take shelter Were they just docked? Something else?
 * Xuwen, Guangdong and Haikou, Hainan and Yangjiang, Guangdong Add commas after the second part of the location name.
 * 30 cm (12 in) Change cm measurement to 305 mm.
 * Following source here - it says about 30 cm deep. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * A total of 404 ships took shelter in the Port of Zhanjiang. Same thing here.. I assume they just docked.
 * Source gives "anchored in safe areas" - that should be correct. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Ewiniar also spawned a tornado in Dali Is there an EF rating?
 * The paper doesn't give one, unfortunately. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Longgang District, Shenzhen Comma after the second part of the location name.
 * That should be it. Noah Talk 23:07, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
 * done, thanks for the review. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)