Talk:Tropical Storm Harvey (2011)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "Tropical Storm Harvey was a tropical storm that formed and dissipated during the 2011 Atlantic hurricane season." REally? That's as boring as it gets? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. STO12 (talk) 04:57, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "Harvey was also the last in a record-breaking string of eight consecutive storms that reached only tropical storm status. Hurricane Irene, the next storm to form after Harvey, reached hurricane status. Harvey developed from a westward-moving tropical wave that emerged off the coast of Africa. " delink Africa, major place. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. STO12 (talk) 05:02, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "The origins of Tropical Storm Harvey trace back to a westward-moving Atlantic tropical wave that is estimated to have passed over Dakar, Senegal, at 0000 UTC on August 11, 2011.[3]" dleink Atlantic per above.
 * Done. STO12 (talk) 16:24, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * " At 1800 UTC on August 18, the system was designated Tropical Depression Eight, with maximum sustained winds of 35 mph (56 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 1006 mb.[2][16]" inHg? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. STO12 (talk) 16:34, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "Continuing to deepen, Tropical Depression Eight attained tropical storm status during the afternoon and was named Harvey in an intermediate advisory at 1800 UTC.[18] " what is an intermediate advisory? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * An Intermediate Advisory is an advisory that is released before an official advisory. No change needed. STO12 (talk) 04:52, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * The layman does not know that. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  04:53, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * What is a "layman"? STO12 (talk) 04:57, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * The average reader. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  05:15, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * I see, but it is good information, is there a link to information on an intermediate advisory? STO12 (talk) 16:21, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Link it to National Hurricane Center. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:54, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Where on that article should I link it to? STO12 (talk) 17:07, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Intermediate advisory. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  04:00, 12 November 2012 (UTC)


 * " Adverse conditions on the island began on August 15 and had mostly cleared by August 18, although residual shower activity remained possible throughout the day.[21]" redundant to MH, and since it was only a TL when it moved through the area, stuff like this can led to confusion. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Do I need to remove it? Or replace it? Or what? STO12 (talk) 16:34, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Remove. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  04:00, 12 November 2012 (UTC)


 * There should be well more impact here. The writing is really good, but it is not comprehensive enough to meet GA status at this time.
 * What do I need to change to make it better? STO12 (talk) 16:26, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * It was more of a general statement. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  04:00, 12 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Cut back on See also stuff, only the Other storms named Harvey and the Timeline of the 2011 AHS should be their IMO. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. STO12 (talk) 04:57, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Ref 2 is a bare url. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Should I remove it? Or replace it? Or what? STO12 (talk) 16:37, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Expand it so it is not a bare url :P YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:54, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Add author first names. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * To which references? STO12 (talk) 16:39, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * All the NHC ones. User:Mitchazenia/Sandbox 7 gives the first names. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * Your link is broken. D: STO12 (talk) 17:07, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Not anymore :) YE  Pacific   Hurricane  17:10, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Don't use staff writer on the refs. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Which refs in particular? STO12 (talk) 16:39, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Refs 21, 23, 24, and 25. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:54, 21 October 2012 (UTC)


 * The TCR is not used at all in the article. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, but what is a TCR? STO12 (talk) 16:39, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * TCR=Tropical Cyclone Report. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * What should I add that to? STO12 (talk) 17:07, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * The MH. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  17:10, 21 October 2012 (UTC)

Haven't been any updates since YE's notes on the 11th; should this be failed? Wizardman 17:31, 1 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm going to fail it. It's not complete yet. The MH skips from development to remnants. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:13, 4 December 2012 (UTC)