Talk:Tropical Storm Trudy (2014)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 19:08, 13 November 2015 (UTC)

All in all, a cute little article. No major issues. Lemme know when done so I can pass. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 19:08, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Anything else for the lead? Like preparations? :P
 * Hush you... (added a bit) ~ Cyclonebiskit (chat) 19:25, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
 * "Located over warm waters of 86 °F (30 °C) and within a very moist region with low wind shear, intensification was a certainty as the depression approached Mexico." - garden path sentence. This implies that intensification was located over warm waters.
 * "as stalling just on of offshore" - I'm guessing you mean "on or offshore", but just had to check
 * Was just offshore, guess I had a brain fart in the middle of that thought. ~ Cyclonebiskit (chat) 19:25, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
 * "The depression dissipated early on October 19 as it moved slowly northeastward over Mexico." - maybe explain what this means? For the longest, even I didn't understand what dissipation meant, especially how it could regenerate. Maybe combine a bit with the following sentence, something like "The low-level circulation dissipated early on October 19, and the depression ceased to be a tropical cyclone."
 * Maybe add when TD 9 formed?
 * "A total of 35 shelters were opened along the eastern portion of the state" - which state?
 * Thanks for the review, Hink! Made all the corrections~