Talk:Tropical Storm Warren (1984)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "After killing 17 while crossing the archipelago," As a disturbance?
 * Should be pretty clear it was a disturbance already given that end of the sentence and the previous sentence. YE Pacific Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "attaining peak strength." At?
 * I tend to avoid the JTWC/JMA bullshit in the lead. YE Pacific Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Who issued the TCFA?
 * It's already mentioned in the wikilink for TCFA so while I sometimes mention it was issued by the JTWC, I don't think it should be something that is required. YE Pacific Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * JTWC abbreviation needed.
 * ✅. YE Pacific Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "monsoonal sure of moisture"
 * Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "afternoon November 2" Missing a word.
 * Added a word. YE Pacific Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "Offshore Marinduque Island," Here too.
 * That's fine unless I'm missing something? I use "Offshore X," all the time and it's never been brought up before. YE Pacific Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Probably best to replace Aurora with a red link than what it is right now.
 * Even better, I replaced it with an actual blue link. YE Pacific Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "Additionally, twelve other people died due landslides." Add "elsewhere".
 * Sure. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Assuming no Vietnamese impact.
 * Vietnam is to TC info as oil is to water. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

That's it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  03:54, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review man. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)