Talk:Tropical Storm Winona (1990)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 07:15, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With the issues outlined below having been addressed, the article satisfies MOS policies for grammar, as well as general structural layout. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 04:08, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
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: The article fully uses a very decently-sized quantity of reputable sources. No signs of original research. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 04:06, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
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: The article satisfactorily covers all expected aspects of its topic. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 04:05, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
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. The article maintains a non-biased approach to its topic. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 04:04, 31 January 2018 (UTC) . The article has not been subjected to edit warring or similar behaviour since its creation. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 07:18, 29 January 2018 (UTC) : The two images used in the article to-date are public domain, and serve relevant illustrative purposes in this article. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 07:18, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
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Comments

 * "Meteorological history" paragraph 2: "...simultaneously, the agency estimated that the typhoon in peak intensity, with winds of 120 km/h (75 mph)..." They estimated that the typhoon in peak intensity... what?
 * "Impact", paragraph 1: "A peak rainfall total occurred of 545 mm (21.5 in) in Hakone..." Shouldn't use of the term "occurred" occur after the numeric amount?
 * "Impact", paragraph 3: "Damage was estimated at damage totaled 243.1 million yen"... No comment. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 09:53, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Cleared up in 3 instances. Thanks for the review. YE Pacific Hurricane  23:13, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks! That about clears it up! Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 04:04, 31 January 2018 (UTC)

The article satisfies the GA criteria, and therefore is passed. Congratulations! Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 04:08, 31 January 2018 (UTC)