Talk:Tropical Storm Zelda (1991)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 03:22, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Hello User:CycloneIsaac, I will be reviewing this article tonight. Hopefully soon I will be listing it as a Good Article. Anyway, the following are the issues I found with this article:
 * No fatalities or damage toll?
 * Nope, sorry.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:50, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "Severe Tropical Storm Zelda was the last storm of the 1991 Pacific typhoon season." - Sounds about as interesting as the DYK hook we were talking about earlier today :P
 * It's even better than that.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:39, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "A disturbance formed near the International Dateline, and strengthened" - International Dateline should be International Date Line. Ditto with the other uses of the term throughout the article
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:39, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "track the storm until it re-entered the International Dateline." - Aside from fixing "International Dateline", add the date that this occurred. Btw, "re-entered the International Date Line" is kind of an odd word choice. Maybe say "until it crossed the International Date Line again on [insert date]".
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:59, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "In late November, a circulation was generated near the" - Wikilink atmospheric circulation
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:59, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "Advisory at 0600 UTC on November 25." - Wikilink Coordinated Universal Time
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:59, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "Vertical wind shear prevented strengthening" - Wikilink wind shear
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:59, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "Later, a trough created by" - Here's another one :P Wikilink trough (meteorology)
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:59, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "The storm weakened past Category 1 typhoon strength on " - It would probably be better to say something like "below Category 1 typhoon strength" than "past Category 1 typhoon strength"
 * Changed.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 04:01, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "Few hours later, JTWC downgraded the storm" - I think you are a word :P --12george1 (talk) 03:22, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Done?&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 04:01, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "November 28, producing winds as high as 100 miles per hour (160 km/h)." - Reverse the order of the units of measure and abbreviate miles per hour
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:39, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * "By March 26, 1992, about $68,000 (1991 USD) worth of relief goods" - Wikilink United States dollars
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 03:50, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, good job. Mostly its just stuff involving wikilinks. That should be it.--12george1 (talk) 03:22, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Done with everything.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 04:04, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Alright then, I will pass this article and list it as a Good Article. Congratulations,