Talk:Trouble (Natalia Kills song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 20:33, 28 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Prose
 * Lead
 * In infobox, just the standard edition's duration should be used, and keep it simplified (i.e. 3:42)

✅
 * Background and release
 * The last sentence should not be all italicized.

✅
 * Composition and reception
 * "fun." should read "Fun", as stylizations shouldn't be used here.

✅
 * Remix
 * There's an inconsistency with duration. Is it 3:39 or 4:52?

✅
 * In infobox, include a release date, which seems to be April 8, 2014 unless one counts the online release of February 21, 2014. Remember that the earliest release is to be used.

✅ (Added the iTunes date because the premiere really doesn't count)
 * Sourcing
 * Composition and reception
 * Not that primary sources are bad, but are there any third party sources that talk about the song reflecting her argument with a boyfriend and wanting to burn the house down? (ref#9) I'd also opt for a source that also mentions it in more than just one sentence.

since it isn't sourced by anything else.
 * Live performances
 * Ref#21 (zmonline.com) is dead as indicated here


 * Music video
 * Using a review from fashion sites like Refinery29 (ref#17) seems questionable unless this reviewer is a music critic.


 * Coverage
 * Live performances
 * Can this be expanded beyond two sentences? If possible, I recommend at least one full paragraph.

Expanded the most possible.


 * Neutrality
 * No problems here


 * Stability
 * No problems here


 * GA Result
 * If the above is addressed within the next seven days, I will pass the GAN.

I think that everything has been addressed. Thanks for the quick review.  prism  △ 21:27, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Now passing XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 22:01, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I've already listed it as GA per this diff.  prism  △ 22:06, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
 * I noticed. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 22:10, 28 April 2014 (UTC)