Talk:True Love (Kanye West and XXXTentacion song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 19:31, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Lede

 * Any ideas why this article isn't at "True Love (song)"?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:32, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I looked and it is listed at the moment; must have been forgotten as an addition initially! --K. Peake 13:31, 17 October 2022 (UTC)


 * For the song's single version, the album edit was revised - I don't know what this means.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:32, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * The term "revised" is often used to refer to the song going through changes for a new version; that would be too wordy for the lead however and edited after album edit looks too repetitive. --K. Peake 13:31, 17 October 2022 (UTC)


 * played in the documentary of the same name. - is the documentary "Look at me:The Album"? Might be worth saying what the documentary is about.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:32, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ --K. Peake 13:31, 17 October 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Wait, XXX is dead? The lede didn't mention at all this was post-humerous.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:39, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Link tweet.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:39, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * [4][6][10][11] - WP:CITEKILL  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:39, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ for the above --K. Peake 13:31, 17 October 2022 (UTC)


 * The body should really link and introduce things from the lede, like both West and XXX.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:39, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I added more links including these two, however they don't need reintroducing when they're the main artists. --K. Peake 13:31, 17 October 2022 (UTC)

Review meta comments

 * I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 19:31, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, I was slightly delayed due to being away from home but have addressed everything now! --K. Peake 13:31, 17 October 2022 (UTC)


 * No problem. If you enjoyed this, I do have a number of items at GAN from my nominations list.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:46, 17 October 2022 (UTC)