Talk:True North (Once Upon a Time)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Grapple X (talk · contribs) 17:18, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria Oh, hey, Krycek.
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * "in a parallel with the story of Hansel and Gretel (Lord/Collins)" -> I'd say it's already implied that the kids fit these roles, so I'd drop the bracketed bit here. "who invites him to hang out." -> seems a little informal. " [in 'The Price of Gold']" -> both source and MOS use double quote marks ("The Price of God"), so stick with that. "as Young Peter Bishop and Young Olivia Dunham" -> "as younger versions of Peter Bishop and Olivia Dunham" "It earned a 3.3/8 among adults between the ages of 18 and 49," -> include a link to Nielsen rating and explain what the numbers mean (% of sets in use/total population) "'ong enough to watch 'True North.'"" -> dropping the single quotes and adding italics would be an acceptable typographical change.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * Grand
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * Although it does seem complicated, I'm wondering if the plot section is a little long.
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Yep
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * Fine
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * Images are grand.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Not a lot of work to be done here, on hold for seven days. GRAPPLE   X  20:17, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * Images are grand.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Not a lot of work to be done here, on hold for seven days. GRAPPLE   X  20:17, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I know the plot is a bit long, but I can't really find anything useless to trim, as this is one of those series that usually has every little detail possessing some level of significance. Otherwise I believe I've addressed your concerns (italicized True North and tweaked the prose). Thanks, as always, for reviewing! Wow, that man certainly knows his science fiction...!  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:01, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Fairy muff then, happy enough to pass this one. Well done! If you haven't checked him out yet, do so. GRAPPLE   X  04:23, 31 October 2012 (UTC)