Talk:Trump National Golf Club Westchester/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:53, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 13:53, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Lead

 * "2016 U.S. Presidential election," - spell out as 2016 United States Presidental election as you have done in the main article
 * fixed

History

 * Who was Walter W. Law?
 * fixed


 * "In 1922 Devereux" - comma is needed in between "1922" and "Devereux" for consistency
 * fixed


 * "In 1948 Henry" - ditto
 * fixed


 * "construction began May 1928" - construction began in May 1928
 * fixed


 * "In 1980, ownership of the club changed hands again" - Do we know exactly who became the club's new owner in 1980?
 * Sadly no.

Trump's purchase and redevelopment

 * "7 tennis courts," - 7 should be spelt out
 * fixed


 * "until he closed the property to begin work on the property." - repetition of "property"
 * fixed

Reopening and further events

 * "The thirteenth hole cost Trump $7 million, surrounded by an artificial 101-foot (31 m) black granite waterfall, which pumps 5,000 US gallons (18,900 l) a minute." - needs a citation


 * added


 * "the club sued the town of Ossining to lower its worth from $13.5 million to $1.4 million in order to lower property and school taxes;" - repetition of lower
 * fixed


 * Wikilink Horace Greeley High School
 * fixed

Current operations

 * "initiation fees were $100,000-$150,000." - initiation fees were between $100,000-$150,000
 * fixed