Talk:Truth Serum (EP)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 17:52, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * related to the matter → related to that matter ✅
 * to keep those tracks for herself, because she considered them too personal → to keep those tracks for herself as she considered them too personal ✅
 * released independently → other way round ✅
 * Unlink "record deal" as it's a pretty common term ✅
 * the tracks talk about her "most intense" love affair → you don't need the "..." here ✅
 * mostly positive reviews from critics → you can add "music" to critics to sound better ✅
 * It peaked at number 13 → state "the record" here as it may get confused with "the songs" ✅
 * the forty-ninth best-selling album during 2014 in the country → 2014's 49th best-selling album in the country ✅
 * spending 23 weeks on the chart → leave "on the chart" out as you have Norwegian Albums Chart ✅
 * The Great Escape Festival in United Kingdom → add "the" before United Kigdom ✅
 * was released as the third single from the EP. It was a commercial success in Europe and Oceania → (to avoid word repetition) was released as the third single from the EP to commercial success in Europe and Oceania, ... ✅

Infobox

 * You need alternative text for the cover art ✅

Background and release

 * with whom played → with whom she played
 * an English A&R → link "A&R" to artist and repertoire
 * writing songs about the matter → "the" to "that"
 * could not handled it anymore → is it supposed to mean "could not handle it anymore"?
 * the artist released independently → the artist independendly released
 * It received a larger attention from music blogs → state "from publications" here to avoid repetition
 * Unlink "record deal", as in the lead
 * and that it will be released → and that it would be released

Inspiration and composition

 * several songs prior the release → several songs prior to the release
 * were taken from the demos → were taken from her demos + unlink "demos"
 * that; "When you look → that "when you look
 * to being under the influence of drugs.[38][39][40][27] → fix the order of the references
 * "[could not] think straight".[41][8] → same
 * her boyfriend end the relationship.[43][29] → same

Promotion

 * which are represented as black ghosts.[50][25] → order of references
 * The song was a commercial success → say "the recording" here to avoid repetition
 * It was a commercial success in some European countries → It similarly experienced success in Europe
 * for her first UK show → for her first show in the United Kingdom
 * on American TV → on American television
 * on American music TV → same as above

Critical reception

 * received mostly positive reviews → ... from music critics
 * Alex Panisch → you have already mentioned him, so only state "Panisch" here
 * of the Norwegian publication of Gaffa → second "of" is superfluous

Commercial performance

 * was the forty-ninth best-selling → was the 49th best-selling

Track listing

 * flawless ;)

Personnel

 * Credits and personnel for Truth Serum adapted from the Swedish edition of the EP. → Credits adapted from the Swedish version of Truth Serum

Charts

 * flawless

Release histrory

 * Unlink all labels and formats here

Copy-violation

 * 35.1% is acceptable!

Images

 * All seems fine with that image ;)

Samples

 * You need to add a use rationale for Truth Serum to the sample; as it stands now, it is only to be used on "Habits (Stay High)". See this as an example.

Links

 * No problems here!

Outcome
Great job on the article! Putting this for 7 days. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:00, 28 May 2017 (UTC)


 * I have addressed all of your comments! Thank you so much for reviewing this article. Have a nice day! --Paparazzzi (talk) 22:02, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing this! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:38, 29 May 2017 (UTC)