Talk:Truth and Reconciliation Commission (Nepal)

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So far so good! IntroductionDwebsterbu (talk) 01:29, 24 February 2016 (UTC) is succinct but has the main points and the outline seems promising.

Comments on final draft It's a really interesting story. I would recommend trying as much as possible in the time you have available to address the peer review comments, which are good suggestions.

The phrase "A report was officially submitted to the government in 1991, but it was made public only in 1994" appears twice - re-word to remove repetition.

You should go ahead and move your article to the Wikipedia mainspace. Tips on doing this appear in the “Moving Out of Your Sandbox” handout, at https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Classroom_handout_-_moving_out_of_your_sandbox.pdf

You may also wish to consult, before the final deadline at the end of next week, the handout on “Polishing Your Article” at https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Polishing_your_articles.pdf Dwebsterbu (talk) 19:48, 23 March 2016 (UTC)