Talk:Tuarii/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 15:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * Is the queen in "Queen regnant" capitalized? I've seen both ways and I'm not sure which one is technically correct
 * Changed.


 * "resistance government in the Raiatean rebellion (1887–1897) " - I may be wrong but my gut instinct suggests during instead of in
 * Changed.


 * Wikilink Opoa if that's the correct place
 * Changed.


 * "After Tehauroa's death, a civil war nearly broke out between two rivals for the throne." - Do we know a year on this?
 * Changed.


 * "In 1887 or 1888" - I think it might read better as "In either 1887 or 1888", but if you don't like that, ignore it.
 * Changed.


 * Wiklink Consul to Consul (representative)
 * Changed.


 * "1878 Kanak in New Caledonia" - Kanak is linked to a people group, but the context makes it sound like a rebellion. I think the same thing came up in the Teraupo'o review
 * Changed.


 * "Teraupo’o" - Wrong '
 * Changed.


 * "two French warships, the Duguay Trouin and L'Aube arrived" - Comma between L'Aube and arrived
 * Changed.


 * "the rebel chief's captured after two months of" - I think it should be capture not captured
 * Changed.


 * "The casualty of the six-week campaign was nearly fifty deaths mainly on the side of the Raiateans" - I think it should be casualties and were instead of casualty and was
 * Changed.


 * Wikilink francs
 * Changed.


 * Can we get a translation for the French quote towards the end?
 * Changed.


 * I see no issue with the family tree and WP:NOTGENEALOGY, since it's a royal family and is important to the background of the story

2.
 * Ref 14 needs the year and the page number, if available.
 * The date is not available. I've try looking for it to no avail. It’s an online encyclopedia without any dates for its entries.
 * Makes sense, all fine in that area then.

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Placing on hold. One ref formatting issue and a handful of minor prose issues. Good work. Hog Farm (talk) 17:23, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * See changes. KAVEBEAR (talk) 21:03, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Promoting