Talk:Tudur Hen/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:32, 24 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Tudur the Eldar typo? And here: later interned on
 * Fixed. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Link seneschal
 * Added. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * with the Welsh forces the English invasion of Gwynedd missing word?
 * Added the missing "during". Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In September 1278, lands were restored by King Edward I of England to Tudur and his brothers When had they been seized?
 * I was having an odd day with my wording I think - changed to "granted". Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * who sided with use a synonym for "sided" as it's in close proximity to another example.
 * Switched to "joined". Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * English in 1294-95 use an endash between date ranges.
 * Forgot to run the dash fixer - all sorted now. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * it was proposed that Tudur "has been" instead of "was"
 * Done. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Tudur used the English property laws, which he found more advantageous in his position than those used by the Welsh. How so?
 * Added an explanation - the Welsh laws would have required him to split up his lands between his sons. The English property laws allowed for inheritance by his eldest son only. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for reviewing. Let me know if there is anything else. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)