Talk:Tule Island/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:40, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments Fixed. That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:09, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Similar to the other small island article, this feels too short to be a good article but we'll go with the flow and see what we get.
 * I think it might be a stretch for this one; I scoured existing references pretty well, but I could try to come up with some more.
 * "farm potatoes, which now consists mostly" perhaps "but which now" or "and which".
 * ✅ Have copyedited this sentence a little.
 * "USGS aerial imagery ..." fragment, no full stop.
 * ✅ Fixed.
 * " City of Stockton" why is "City" capitalised?
 * ✅ No particularly good reason, fixed.
 * "as a fishing location" you didn't link fishing in the lead?
 * ✅ Sure, why not.
 * "the 1959 musical" no need for that year.
 * ✅ Fixed.
 * "Fern-Headreach-Tule complex" what is that?
 * ✅ Added some description in "Geography".
 * "The Modesto Bee" The is part of the name.
 * ✅ Fixed.
 * "$5 to $6 million" maybe $5–6 million. And inflate.
 * ✅ Done.
 * Ref 6 SHOUTING.
 * Well, there we go. jp×g 08:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)