Talk:Turán's brick factory problem/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 00:11, 18 September 2017 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


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Looks pretty good. Only some minor issues that may or may not require action.
 * 1) The second paragraph of "Upper bound" could use a reference
 * 2) "Nevertheless, it is conjectured that Zarankiewicz's and Urbanik's formula is optimal." Do we know where this conjecture comes from? Does it pre-date the disproof of their result? The article implies that it arose after special cases were proven.
 * 3) "Although some special cases of it are known to be true" Are these remnants of the original proof, or were they independently proven? If so, do we know by whom and when?
 * Hawkeye7  (discuss)  00:11, 18 September 2017 (UTC)

Re #1, I'm confused. The second paragraph of that section (the one beginning "However, their proofs") has two references. Did you think that the displayed equation created a paragraph break? It doesn't. Regardless, I have added another footnote to the end of the first paragraph sourcing the construction.

Re #2, I don't know, but I suspect it was around the time of the discovery by Ringel and Kainen that Zarankiewicz's claimed proof was erroneous. The first published reference to this discovery that we have is Guy (1969). Kleitman (1970) writes "We shall refer to (4) as Zarankiewicz's conjecture"; maybe he first chose this phrase? But to say so would be original research, of course.

Re #3, this is merely a forward reference to the first two sentences of the "Lower bounds" section which detail cases for which it is known to be true, with citations to whom and when. Re "remnants": Z's proof still works for K3,n but I'm now realizing that, while I use this in one of my recent papers I neglected to mention it here. (Z's surviving proof remnant; that is. My paper is not relevant enough to mention.) Do you think I should? —David Eppstein (talk) 05:26, 19 September 2017 (UTC)
 * I would, but it's up to you. I don't think it is necessary for GA.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  06:58, 19 September 2017 (UTC)

All points addressed. Passing article now. Hawkeye7  (discuss)  06:58, 19 September 2017 (UTC)