Talk:Turbojet train

Wording of opening paragragh
Hi, could the wording of the first paragragh before the contents box be re-worded please? There is one sentence with at least four commas in and it's very hard to read.

Many thanks

217.34.59.78 (talk) 12:29, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
 * I've touched up the intro so as to make it more readable.  — Demonic Party Hat  talk  20:46, 6 May 2013 (UTC)