Talk:Turkey Tolson Tjupurrula/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomcat7 (talk · contribs) 11:46, 27 November 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * "and the longest-serving chairman of the Papunya Tula Artists company." -suggest replacing the underline with "its"
 * "Contemporary Indigenous Australian art of the western desert began " - suggest to replace it with eg "arose", to avoid two times "began"
 * " geeometrical" - geometrical?--Tomcat (7) 19:16, 27 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Thank you Tomcat, that was much appreciated, and I have made changes in response to you three points. hamiltonstone (talk) 00:00, 28 November 2012 (UTC)