Talk:Turtle farming

In Réunion
Turtle farming has stopped in Réunion. The facility has been transformed into a public aquarium called Kélonia. Thierry Caro (talk) 23:18, 17 January 2010 (UTC)

Couple of things
I've looked over the article.

First, the lede need not be sourced. That being said, I would make the lede more of a summary or capstone of the article. It's rather too chatty and need streamlining.

Second, I think the prose needs some work before you should aspire to GA. You need to make sure tenses agree, that singular nouns do not have plural verb forms. Second, it may well be that this is the sum total of what you can get on this, but things seem picked up and dropped a bit in the middle (the Japanese turtle farm you got the fine illustration of seems to vanish. Is later info available?))

More figures, say the worldwide trade in turtles, would be nice if you can get them. Also, worldwide trends in same.

I've watchlisted it. I don't think it is GA quality yet, it doesn't feel cohesive. A bit more info to try to bind together what you have would be good.--Wehwalt (talk) 22:01, 16 March 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Good comments.TCO (talk) 22:16, 16 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I mean, I could go through and pick up all the glitches, but at an early state of review, it's pointless because the tide will come in and back a few times before you are ready for GA! I'll keep an eye on it and tell me when you are about to list it for GA, I'll go through it in picky detail then.--Wehwalt (talk) 22:19, 16 March 2011 (UTC)

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