Talk:Tuvalu at the Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

Going to review this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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General

 * All mentions of "100 m" and its variants need to be written as "100 metres" in the prose for example. --✅

National Olympic Committee

 * Can you clarify who Robert Laupula is? --I believe the sentence clarifies it well enough? If not, could you give me an example?
 * "TASNOC organizes Tuvalu's participation in the Commonwealth Games" - rewrite to The TASNOC organizes Tuvalu's participation in the Commonwealth Games --✅
 * " Isala T. Isala is currently the secretary general," Think Isala T. Isala is the current secretary general would be an improvement over the current version. --✅

2012 Summer Games

 * "and Manoa set a national record in the event." - clarify for readers that Manoa set a national record in the women's 100 metres dash. --Sounds a bit awkward, but done.

You've made a good effort on this so far. On hold until the issues have been resolved. MWright96 (talk) 18:26, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
 * See above. Dat GuyTalkContribs 20:48, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Looking back with who Robert Laupula is, I believe that is now a non-issue. With that said this article can now be promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:16, 27 October 2017 (UTC)