Talk:Two for the Knight/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Grk1011 (talk · contribs) 15:36, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi I'll be reviewing this for you. Expect comments within the next day or so. Grk1011 (talk) 15:36, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Image licensing checks out
 * Add concert chronology for Brian McKnight to the infobox
 * Added


 * "McKnight and Velasquez performed individual shows," -> maybe something like "McKnight and Velasquez performed individual solo sets," as the event itself is the show.
 * Revised as suggested


 * replace "McKnight and Velasquez" in last sentence with "the singers"
 * Done

Background and development

 * "but did not materialize" <- a missing word in there
 * Tweaked this part


 * ^ the above sentence is also a bit of a run-on
 * Refer to above comment


 * For the scheduling conflict, does the ref actually say it was a conflict or is it just establishing that he was doing something else around the same time? The dates themselves do not overlap.
 * Revised this bit to improve flow with the previous statement, without mentioning that it was a conflict, only that he ended up appearing in the latter's show instead.


 * Both quotes check out in their respective refs
 * Add quotation marks for "Go the Distance"
 * Done

Synopsis and reception

 * "movie theme songs" -> film songs? I recall a guidelines saying not to use "movie". Consider alternatives.
 * Done


 * "1970s, and was followed" -> "1970s, which were followed"
 * Done


 * "McKnight's part began with" -> "McKnight's solo part then began with"
 * Done


 * Remainder of quotes check out

Set list

 * Add quotation marks to "To Reach You"
 * Done


 * It might be helpful to add a sentence to the top to identify Regine's, Brian's, and the duets.
 * I've split the setlist per artist, similar to co-headlining setlist formats. Indicated where a duet was performed.

Discussion
Hi not much to fix. Good job with this! Grk1011 (talk) 18:49, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
 * - thanks for taking up this review. I have actioned all comments above. Let me know if I may have missed anything or require further changes. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:34, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Made a couple minor fixes. Passing now! Great job. Grk1011 (talk) 21:39, 20 November 2023 (UTC)