Talk:Tyan Taylor/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 20:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Taylor was named to the New South Wales team --> Named? Appointed, maybe? I see this type of wording throughout the article as well, so try to fix it in other places as well.
 * Changed two of them: selected, awarded. --LauraHale (talk) 20:57, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Personal --> Personal life
 * Fixed for all. --LauraHale (talk) 20:57, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * A few paragraphs are way too small, and should be bonded together.
 * Did that for this one. Worried that putting them into fewer paragraphs would make the paragraphs look more disjointed as the together in one paragraph themes work. --LauraHale (talk) 21:00, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Other than that, I have found no issues with the article. Great work!