Talk:Type 1936C destroyer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox:
 * "Kriegsmarine" must be in italics
 * an improvement upon the "of" Type 1936A and Bdestroyers
 * Work "The construction" was constantly interrupted
 * by numerous problems, chief among them dominantly due to air raids
 * comma is missing after "Z46 and Z47" in the last sentence of the lead.
 * were blown up in their shipyards by Allied troops; as they're in construction they'll obviously be stationed at their shipyards only, no need of special mention.
 * Link the units in infobox; waterline, standard load, overall, design load, nautical miles etc. and the also the items in "armament" field
 * Section 1;
 * Everything looks fine, except that a few links are to added. In para 2, you can add links of LC.41 twin turrets, anti-aircraft guns, depth charge launchers etc.
 * Section 2;
 * as an improvement upon "of" both the Type 1936A and B destroyers.
 * two ships of the class, Z46, and Z47 were ordered on 8 October 1941; Please check the use commas at the pennant numbers.
 * but began "was restarted" again
 * The building "construction" of the two ships
 * I am not sure about the copyright statues of the image used in infobox. It is taken from a website which has no statement for the usage. Also it is clear that the file is created the uploader.
 * The uploader of the image is the owner of the website, as seen |here.
 * No plagiarism detected.
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 02:04, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe I have done all you have asked. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  02:53, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
 * two ships of the class, Z46, and Z47 were ordered on 8 October 1941; Please check the use commas at the pennant numbers.
 * but began "was restarted" again
 * The building "construction" of the two ships
 * I am not sure about the copyright statues of the image used in infobox. It is taken from a website which has no statement for the usage. Also it is clear that the file is created the uploader.
 * The uploader of the image is the owner of the website, as seen |here.
 * No plagiarism detected.
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 02:04, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe I have done all you have asked. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  02:53, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
 * The uploader of the image is the owner of the website, as seen |here.
 * No plagiarism detected.
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 02:04, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe I have done all you have asked. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  02:53, 13 November 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 16:05, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 16:05, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 16:05, 13 November 2017 (UTC)