Talk:Typhoon Billie (1959)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 20:51, 28 August 2014 (UTC)


 * I think the first sentence should be that it was the first typhoon tracked by the JTWC. That's a little more interesting than what's there.
 * "Billie's affects" - any time it's a noun, use "effects". Ditto down in the impact section
 * "JTWC bulletins and warnings commenced accordingly" - what was the storm number?
 * I'm confused. Were the peak winds according to JMA or JTWC?
 * I wouldn't really say "forcing" is the appropriate word when describing extratropical transition
 * Anything more on the Japan deaths? That sounds pretty deadly without having much info
 * "resulting in the additional displacement of people" - additional to what? The homeless in Taipei? I'd guess they became homeless because of this damage.
 * Anything else for China?

All in all the article is decent. It just seems on the short side. I know it was 1959, so I'm not expecting too much. Just wondering if it's thorough or not. Cheers! ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 20:51, 28 August 2014 (UTC)