Talk:Typhoon Dolphin (2015)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "Typhoon Dolphin was a powerful tropical cyclone that produced the first typhoon-force winds on Guam since Typhoon Pongsona in 2002. " mind linking to 2002 PTS at the end? YE Pacific  Hurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Not at all. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)


 * " It had a poorly-defined circulation and broad rainbands, while low to moderate wind shear and warm sea surface temperatures favored development.[2]" link to atmospheric circulation due to its first mention here. YE Pacific  Hurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
 * I don't think that link is appropriate. That link talks more about broad scale circulations on earth, not circulations as small as ones in tropical cyclones. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "Preparations and impact" to "Preparations, impact, and aftermath" since this section includes aftermath. YE Pacific  Hurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Done. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "   . Residents lost power and water access for up to two weeks.       " appears to be a fragment. YE  Pacific  Hurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure I understand. Do you mean a sentence fragment? That's not the case. "Residents" is the subject, "lost" is the verb, "power and water access" is the direct object. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "Passing just north of Guam, Dolphin produced the first typhoon-force winds since 2002 during Typhoon Pongsona.[1]" in Guam, right? You mention about Rota which is also north of Guam being the first typhoon winds since 2004? YE Pacific  Hurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Yea, I thought that was implied. I changed. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "Dolphin damaged 390 houses across Guam, of which 9 were destroyed" spell out nine. YE Pacific  Hurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm keeping it as a numeral because it's in the same sentence as "390", per WP:MOSNUM. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing! ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)