Talk:Typhoon Dujuan (2003)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)

In all, very good. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * "Typhoon Dujuan (international designation: 0313,[1] JTWC designation: 14W,[2] PAGASA name: Onyok[3]) was the strongest tropical cyclone to strike the Pearl River delta since Typhoon Hope in 1979" link to 1979 PTS when you say "1979". YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think the season article link is needed when I already link to the storm. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * "Dujuan weakened to severe tropical storm status before making landfall on September 2 in southern China," what's a "severe tropical storm"? (I know what it is, but the average American that sits and eats all day may not :P ). YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Added link. That work? --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * ", naming it Onyok.[3]" link to List of tropical cyclone names here. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Agreed! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * "Radar from the Hong Kong Observatory indicated in inner eye about 20 km (12 mi) in diameter," "in" to "an". YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Err, yes. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * "there was about NT$200 (TWD, $115 million USD)" was about $200 in what? damages? french toasts? basketballs? scooters? Also, you sure it was $200 or $200 million. Or does Twain have no inflation? :P YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * "for the first time since Typhoon York 1999.[6][16] " missing an "in". And link to York 99/1999 PTS's articles. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Added. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)