Talk:Typhoon Faith/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 06:22, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With the issues below addressed, the article complies with MOS policies on grammar, as well as structure and general layout. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 08:34, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
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: The article has plenty of reliable sources that it makes good use of. No signs of original research. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 07:14, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
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: Based on my past experience with articles on subjects of this nature, the article satisfactorily covers all basic aspects of its topic. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 07:13, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
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. The article maintains a neutral approach to its topic, throughout. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 07:12, 29 January 2018 (UTC) . Since its creation, the article has not been subjected to any edit warring or similar disruptive behaviours. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 06:32, 29 January 2018 (UTC) : Both images used in the article are public domain, and serve relevant illustrative purposes. Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 06:32, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
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Comments

 * In the opening paragraph to the intro, it says, "A tropical disturbance located developed within the vicinity of the western Caroline Islands..." Was there supposed to be something more to that "located" bit, or its inclusion merely superfluous? Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 06:52, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Long story short, it's the fault of my copyediting. YE Pacific Hurricane  07:39, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * From "Meteorological history", paragraph 2: "On the evening of December 11, the JTWC increased the intensity of 170 km/h (105 mph), its peak wind speed." Unless something else that was supposed to be added in there was overlooked, shouldn't that be "increased the intensity to 170 km/h"? Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 07:00, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, good call. YE Pacific Hurricane  07:39, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * From "Preparations and Impact: Philippines", paragraph 1: "Sixteen Philippine Airlines flights to and from the central Philippines." The point being, what about the sixteen flights? Could/ought this sentence be merged with one of the surrounding sentences for context? Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 07:09, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Just missed a word here. Fixed. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  07:39, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Awesome! Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 07:43, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

I'm happy to say that this article satisfies the GA criteria. Congratulations! Says the 21st century, &#34;I&#39;m 18 and I like it!&#34; (talk) 08:34, 29 January 2018 (UTC)