Talk:Typhoon Francisco (2013)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Juliancolton (talk · contribs) 17:34, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

It seems the merge discussion has been closed, so now that the article is stable, I'll review it. As I trust you'll take care of this stuff, I'll go ahead and pass the article. Nice job! –  Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 17:34, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Minor quibble here, but I think it's a bit weird that the ordinal indicators in the second sentence are in subscript. I don't know what the MoS says about this, but I've always seen them in superscript.
 * Might be good to figure out a way to link central dense overcast when you talk about the eye being surrounded by deep convection.
 * Japanese refiner company Nansei Sekiyu KK to suspend berthing operations at its facility on Okinawa. - I have no idea what that means, but I'll assume I'm just out of touch.
 * On Izu Ōshima, all 8,365 residents were advised to evacuate for the first time in 27 years, of whom about 1,300 people were forced to evacuate - bit of a cumbersome sentence with the dangling modifier.
 * Finally, I think you should add a brief description for each "see also" link, relating them to Francisco.