Talk:Typhoon Gay (1992)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanefan25 (talk · contribs) 16:51, 5 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I'll take this one too. The review should be up by Wednesday evening.  HurricaneFan 25  16:51, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * You don't have to get every single one, you know ;) Thanks though. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 17:05, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, I wantz to get ahead in this ;)  HurricaneFan 25  17:32, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * After passing through the country, it intensified its peak intensity over open waters Its peak intensity intensified? :P
 * Aww shucks. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * No Marshall Islands citizens were killed → No citizens of Marshall Islands were killed
 * Tweaked. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * JTWC upgraded Gay to a super typhoon, which is a Tighten by removing "which is"
 * Disagreed, I feel that the current wording is ideal. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Link Typhoon Omar?
 * It's already linked twice in the article. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * On Saipan to the north → To the north at Saipan
 * Righty-o! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * That's it! :)
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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