Talk:Typhoon Hester (1952)/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:41, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Another typhoon -- fun will be had by all. Courcelles (talk) 16:41, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Marshall Islands or the Marshall Islands? I've always heard it with the definite article?
 * I think it's the latter, and I changed it to that. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Do you really mean to link Micronesia? Or the modern day Federated States of Micronesia?  "In the sentence The storm began to rapidly intensify, as it moved north of Micronesia.")
 * Changed it to Caroline Islands instead. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * "Hester began to curve eastward and began to weaken rapidly." Try to avoid using "began" twice in one sentence.
 * Fixed. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * "The Navy estimated" Spell out which navy you mean.
 * Done. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Non-fatal injuries are also casualties, so you have the wrong word in "Overall, eighteen people were injured on Enewetak, and there were no casualties." You mean no fatalities.
 * Changed. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Next sentence needs to start with a "The"
 * Done. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)


 * "Hester past south of Guam" Hester passed.
 * Fixed. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Courcelles (talk) 16:54, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Once again, thanks for the review. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Two minor changes made myself, and promoted. Courcelles (talk) 21:19, 24 April 2018 (UTC)