Talk:Typhoon Higos (2002)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 20:30, 7 October 2012 (UTC)


 * . YE  Pacific   Hurricane  20:30, 7 October 2012 (UTC)

Nice job Hurricanehink!
 * "Typhoon Higos (international designation: 0221,[1] JTWC designation: 25W[2]) was estimated to have been the third strongest typhoon to affect Tokyo since World War II. " "estimated" seems odd here IMO. I suggest you drop it. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Changed to "considered", since I don't think every typhoon's exact intensity was known, going back to WWII. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 21:07, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "Higos passed very near Tokyo around 1200 UTC that day,[4] and the JTWC estimated it was the third strongest typhoon to affect the city since World War II.[2] " I suggest re-wording it to ""Higos passed very near Tokyo around 1200 UTC that day,[4] becoming the third strongest typhoon to affect the city since World War II.[2] ". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * K. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 21:07, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * ". By that time, the storm was beginning to transition into an extratropical cyclone, and at 0600 UTC on October 2 Higos completed the transition.[1] At that time, the JTWC discontinued advisories.[2] " It looks weird as "that time", suggest re-wording the "at that time" to "Subsequently" or "Simultaneously". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * K. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 21:07, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Any aftermath? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Nah, I got a ton of news sources, and it didn't cover any impact. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 21:07, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Anything from relief web? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Nope, I checked. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 21:07, 7 October 2012 (UTC)