Talk:Typhoon Holly (1984)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 23:41, 8 May 2020 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.


 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: pass
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: pass
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * form, did you mean from?
 * Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Can tropical depression be wikilinked?
 * Sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Meteorological history

 * While Tropical Storm Gerald was forming in the South China Sea,the Western Pacific..., please make a space after the comma
 * Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
 * A large storm, Holly slowly deepened, oddly worded
 * Better? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)