Talk:Typhoon Ike/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 00:48, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * This one's been sitting here a while, let's take a look. Courcelles (talk) 00:48, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Assume "Typhoon Ike also struck a country a mere" should read "the country"?
 * ✅. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * I'll admit I might be missing it, but why isn't the year mentioned in the lead?
 * Added. If the title had the year in it, it wouldn't be necessary though. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Of course, but this one doesn't :) Courcelles (talk) 14:32, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * "Ike briefly attained typhoon status briefly" Two briefly's in five words...
 * Axed the second. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * "6,000 residencies" Don't you mean residences?
 * Yes. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * "perfecture" is not a word.
 * Fixed the typo. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * "The storm brought 76–127 mm (3.0–5.0 in) to most of the affected areas" The words "of rain" belong in there somewhere.
 * Good call. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * "died fish," You mean dried.
 * Yes. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * "of skin milk."???
 * Fixed I think. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * That's all I've got. Courcelles (talk) 01:08, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  06:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 14:32, 24 July 2018 (UTC)