Talk:Typhoon Janis/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)

I will be doing the review now. Noah Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)

Review

 * Link Japan in the lead. Noah Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "and after an increase in thunderstorm activity, and on August 3, a tropical depression developed" Needs a slight adjustment. Noah Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Better? YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "After tracking near Guam, Janis tracked generally westward" I would replace one of the tracks. Noah Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Changed the first. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Kyushu is linked three times in the lead. Noah Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Whoops, fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * There is an inconsistency with numbers in the lead. Some two digit numbers are spelled out, while others are in numerical form. Noah Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I think I've explained this to you before. I spell them out if there's a as many or more single digit numbers in the sentence or it's the first word of the sentence. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Abbreviate acres and link to both measurements as people may be unfamiliar with them. Noah Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * That's literally the abbreviation of acres in the template. As for the links, I don't wikilink any other units so... YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "the JMA classified Janis into a severe tropical storm." should be 'as a STS'. Noah Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes, good catch. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Kyushu is linked twice in the MH. Noah Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "Jannis brought winds gusting to 55 km/h (35 mph) and 64 mm (2.25 in) of rain in 24 hours to the island" which island? Noah Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Should be clear by the header :P YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "total occurred of 468 mm (18.4 in) at Nagaoka District." A bit jumbled here. Noah Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Abbreviate acres throughout the Japan section. Noah Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * They literally already are. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Please watch significant figures when converting from hectares to acres. For example, 7000 ha should convert to 20,000 ac. Noah Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Okay, here you may have a point in theory but rounding to the nearest 10K acre does not seem precise. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "including Susaki, suffered a blackout after falling tress" Spelling. Noah Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * "Fukuoka Prefecture, including by three by falling glass" delete the first "by".
 * Fixed, along with a blatant grammar error in the same sentence. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Also have variations in numbers throughout the Japan section. There is a mix of word and numerical values for numbers 99 and lower.
 * Already explained. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Lastly, I noticed that the article has both "canceled" and "cancelled". Noah Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:53, 29 April 2019 (UTC)