Talk:Typhoon Maysak (2015)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 00:33, 1 January 2016 (UTC)

Hello Hurricanehink, I will now be reviewing this article. At first glance, it looks almost GA-worthy. However, I did find a few issues that should be fixed before I believe that the article should be listed as a Good Article.--12george1 (talk) 00:33, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
 * "was the most powerful pre-April tropical cyclone on record in the Northwestern Pacific Ocean, causing severe impacts to the islands of Chuuk and Yap in the Federated States of Micronesia." - That transition between the most powerful pre-April TC and the severe impact looks kinda odd to me personally. Maybe substitute the comma for the word "and" and change "causing" to "caused"?
 * "According to the JMA, Maysak" - What is the JMA? :P
 * Just like I said in your FAC for Juan 85, there should be commas if a city and country are mentioned. So there should be a comma after Philippines: "landfall over Luzon, Philippines as a minimal". Fix any other instances of this
 * Speaking of the Philippines, why is it wikilinked twice in the lead?
 * All in all, it is in fact nearly GA-worthy. Just fix/address these issues in a timely manner so that I can list it as a Good Article. Oh, good luck in the WikiCup--12george1 (talk) 00:33, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
 * It appears that all of these issues have been either fixed or addressed. Therefore, I will pass this article and list it as a Good Article. Again, good luck in the WikiCup--12george1 (talk) 17:10, 1 January 2016 (UTC)