Talk:Typhoon Nabi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 16:24, 2 July 2014 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article later today or tonight. YE Pacific Hurricane  16:24, 2 July 2014 (UTC) Very very good Hink, I swear. YE Pacific Hurricane  18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
 * " By contrast, the JMA estimated peak 10 minute winds of 175 km/h (110 mph) on September 2." who the hec id the JMa? I know, but the average American may not. YE Pacific Hurricane  18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
 * "The typhoon first affected the Northern Marianas Islands, where it left $2.5 million (USD) in damage,[nb 1] after damaging or destroying 114 homes." change "after" to "while", since "after" just does not sound right, given the fact the $2.5 million is part of the damage total. YE Pacific Hurricane  18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
 * "1 minute winds of 260 km/h (160 mph); this is the equivalent of a Category 5 on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale. " change "Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale" to "Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Wind Scale". YE Pacific Hurricane  18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
 * "and the airport was closed, stranding about 1,000 travelers.[17]" were these evacuated? Why are they together with the evacuation part of the sentence then? YE Pacific Hurricane  18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
 * "Later in its duration, Nabi brushed southeastern South Korea with rainbands.[2]" link to rainbands here. YE Pacific Hurricane  18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
 * " A total of 630 m3 (2,066 ft3) of driftwood was recorded.[56]" what is driftwood? YE Pacific Hurricane  18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)